Chantelle's ill research!

The paper is a bit difficult to read in the font that's typed in but if you copy and paste it to a word document then it's no problem. There's barely anything to say about it that isn't positive about the descriptions and the overall structure of the paper. Descriptions of everyone goes beyond the simplicities that most people use in their research. Strawberry blonde hair of the teacher or pigtails and striped sweaters on the little girls can actually give a mental picture and there are the actual interactions between everyone and conversations. Overall this piece does great on putting the reader in this place and can imagine what it's like from all the actions that are going on and what everyone's saying and looking like. Fantastic stuff!